Above Left - First Draft
Above Right - Final Draft
On the heading saying 'Unseen pictures of Green Day's stadium tour', I first added a circle with the page number inside as you can see on the top right picture, but then changed it to an arrow pointing to the text instead, shown in the bottom right, as i thought this would appear clearer to the reader. This straight away tells the reader where to turn to find this article, without having to search through the list of the contents on the bottom half of the page. This keeps interest levels of the consumers, and makes them want to continue reading the magazine.
The 'Top Picks' section looked too 'boxy' before, and to improve this I changed the text to have no line. The image on the above left shows how I did this in the 'Line and Border' tool box. Abover right is the newly improved section, looking much better without the boxes. I also enlarged the headings of the titles above each piece of text, and added a space between the end of the quote and the name of the staff that have given their opinion.
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